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Blue-green splashes as you pull into the sea cliff curve. I stop to view nature's rainbows through a glass swerve. Watch the sparkling waterfalls, trees, stars, and sky. What is more dazzling than a natural wonder display?   Dance with Fall, a waltz that bent the limbs of the trees. Tell me all you've been hiding from me under the seas. Spring, sing to me with the rustling of your wings. Blow on me your savory smells from your swings. Sunflower fluff, silver-throated tanager, brisk July flight An auspicious fall wind makes the hillside maples spray. A damp gust is swollen away by a breath of fresh air. The wind carries pollen, seeds, and dying twigs bare. Written: March 24, 2023

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Date: 3/26/2023 8:44:00 PM
Wow .... so beautiful! I am lost in the beauty of nature and I feel like waltzing with the swaying trees and swinging in the current of cascading waterfalls and running rills! To my FAVE.
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:16:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Sotto, love the imaginary thought of waltzing trees… Belle
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Date: 3/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sotto! A wonderful read for me this evening :-)
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