Walls Will Be Broken

9/8/12

There is a wall that no one can break through
It has stood silently for a long time, begrudgingly still
Many have tried to climb over the wall, but somehow they always slip
Many have tried for years only to give up on it
The only enmities able to climb are the tangling vines
They crawl patiently and gently over the weathered wall of woe
Blooming balms of serene patience, becoming one with it
All humanity is blotted from the mysterious path of horrific nature
The wall towers over all, looking down rather impassively
Mature and grainy through rains and severe storm
Never once discouraged in its intense solitude

But someone began drilling into that unbreakable wall
They drilled night after night, day after day
Trying to figure it out, trying to understand WHY
Crackles and crunches, debris falling fast
The wall no longer passive, but perturbed and aghast 
Drilling and drilling in monomaniac delight 
The hands pushing into the cold and the hot
Holes destroying completion, giving into depletion
Cracks growing bigger, giving view to a river
Flooding, gushing through, pressure giving way 
Drowning the driller and all the land of today

Carnivorous vines curl, cutting off circulation
Behold, the breakable—the revelation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/12/2012 10:09:00 AM
This is really cool...the ending couplet is great, don't think it ends in craziness. Very nice usage of words as well...much enjoyed your work. Awesome!!...;)
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:58:00 PM
Wow! I could see the wall as I read...Nice wording in this,as always. :o)
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