"walls Between Passion"

written by Michael & The Mysterious Lady of Soup


                                                 Michael
                            The walls are tall but I know your there.
                          I hear your voice and the thoughs we share.
                                 So close but can't touch your hand,
                 all I could do is spill out my words and let my pencil land.
                                              Lady of Soup
                         I can feel your heartbeat beyond these walls,
                                one tear drop and my pencil falls.
                           The image of you vibrates my desired needs,
                            every thought about you inside me exceeds.
                                                 Michael
                                   I press my palm on the door,
                      just to feel your hand makes me want you more.
                          My chest is beating to your song of desire.
                      To be inside your body and feel your waves of fire.
                                              Lady of Soup
                        I take a deep breath to feel your essence here.
                           In my mind, the image of becomes so clear.
                             I can not calm a single thought about you.
                  I place my hands on my chest in hopes you get through.
                                                 Michael
                        Soon this door will open , and all shall be revealed.
                     So many things to be said, will start with kisses sealed.
                           To see you standing in your beauty and appeal
                              I have to have you as our passion will steal
                                             Lady of  Soup
                      The time has come for us to be in each others arms
                  before you opened the door, you had me with your charms.
               Lets throw these notes away, and feel the desire for each other.
               Lets keep this a secret between us, my dear poet and sexy lover..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/29/2010 11:42:00 PM
Hi Michael :) Care to spill the beans on who this mysterious lady is?? But I really like that, "Lady of the Soup" --very mysterious! Could be anyone really -- kudos to you two for writing such a passionate poem-- enjoyed reading this-- btw would it be ok for you to pass on a message to the lady? Missing apostrophes on "Let's" for the last 2 lines --hope this helps :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 1:05:00 PM
Well this is certainly a beautiful write Michael with the Mysterious Lady Poet.. very steamy and hot especially the ending luv... enjoyed so much more than that Yankees shutout last night luv.. your Jersey Girl...
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:51:00 AM
Micheal, a breath taking collab you have got here.. Props to you and the Mysterious one ;) One of my favs ~ Enjoyed Wilma
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Date: 10/18/2010 6:32:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work!
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Date: 10/18/2010 6:00:00 PM
lovely Michael, love it and enjoyed both romatic sides. I find this poem wow.. smiles to you and soup lady. the kisses are a hot and heavy appeal of words. Love the poem,..good job too both of you guys,..p.d.
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Date: 10/18/2010 5:17:00 PM
Amazing Michael, the poem is excellent. I truly find the poem juicy from start to end. A work of beauty from you and mystery soup lady. I'm still in awe! love =(^.^)= Royal
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