Walls

I've built up walls, high walls. 

I kept on building those until it became a castle. 

A castle made up of only walls. 

A castle without windows, 

without doors,

without an opening to the outside world.

I am stucked and locked inside my own castle.

A desolated and cold castle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 8, 2016 at 1:42 AM
this is SO GooD, Hannah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 7, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Hannah, them are some tall walls . ... enjoyed. Pd
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