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Walls

White walls don’t speak, Black Walls always cry, Yellow walls Laugh and speak always

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/17/2009 11:42:00 AM
Terriific write Ciara>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 2:00:00 AM
I'm not usually enamoured with western haiku because I find it too pretentious as if the poets is saying 'look how clever I am, reducing worlds to 16 syllables!' However this is genuinely a great work. The theme doesn't follow any laid out rules for haiku but I feel that you have succeeded in creating a work that maintains the spirit of the form. A brilliant poem!
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Date: 7/16/2009 4:22:00 AM
yes, I play w/color in my work, Too! love it! great spoken! too!! your friend, jim
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