Walls

Too thin
these weak walls stand,
keeping cold from comfort;
dividing hope from dying dream’s
lament.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 21, 2008 at 10:28 PM
Great 'd' alliteration in your fourth line... perfect form and flow. Best wishes, Keith
Gorelick Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 9:24 AM
This is the first of your work that I've read and like it very much. Ill read through your writes for sure. BG
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