Wallis

Let me tell you about this girl, this girl from Luxembourg who live in the middle of nowhere. Hair in a bun, golden blonde. Her smile shines that light up her eyes. Gentle strong healing hands, you'd wish you're a dog, a cat or a cadaver in a medical lab just to feel her touch. The troubadours would fall on their knees for this indescribable beauty. And those who can't read knows she is a poetry.

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:04:00 PM

ANTONIJ, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Antonij D.
Date: 10/20/2016 1:27:00 AM

Hi SKAT, thank you for your comment. I'm glad to meet you. I'm just learning poetry, and this community scares me after reading all the great poems here. I'm reading a book now on how to write poetry, and I will definitely try to write a proper poem, I will appreciate it very much if you can comment on it. I thank you again for taking the time and the effort to welcome me. Take care.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/9/2016 12:11:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath//

Antonij D.
Date: 10/9/2016 7:48:00 PM

Hello sir, I appriciate the welcome, thank you. Sir,I would love to know your comment on the poem I submitted, is it a poem? Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2016 6:50:00 AM

Antonij, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Antonij D.
Date: 10/9/2016 7:45:00 PM

Hi, thank you for making me feel at home here in PS. I would love to know your comment on the poem I submitted. I made it for a girl, and I think I made a mistake of giving it to her right away, I dont even know if what I wrote is near poetry. Thank you for your time. Tonij.