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Wallflower

Hello! Do you see me - the wallflower beauty? Am I invisible, honey? Why won’t the bees buzz? Am I out of sight? I am out of sight. I flash smile, twirl in my poppy dress, tap his shoulder - Hello! 7/22/2022 Contest: Radical Rictameter Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 7/24/2022 3:11:00 AM
Love this Poetry Kim. Being patient for the attention that we welcome. God bless you...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 5:39:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/23/2022 1:23:00 AM
Well composed. Loved it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/22/2022 8:45:00 PM
I felt that way a lot in junior high school with those nerdy guys I was crushing on. good one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2022 6:42:00 AM
And we know now, they just weren’t ready…like dough in the oven…lol
Date: 7/22/2022 4:25:00 PM
A fun write that expresses the place many of us have experienced. Waiting for that moment to be noticed. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2022 7:05:00 PM
Yes…waiting for that moment to be noticed :) Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 7/22/2022 3:18:00 PM
Hello Kim, it is sad to be a wall flower at a dance sitting there hoping someone would ask you for a dance. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2022 10:43:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes so sad that this happens. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2022 7:05:00 PM
Too true! Hugs ~ Kim

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