Wallaces Warrior

Early mornings crisp cool sun illuminates the enemies Armour
His stallions breaths jars the air with snorts of deep anticipation
Thoughts race between victory, defeat, life and finality of death
Survive,
Thrive
The moment is nigh
Heart beat strong
Mind race fast
Remember everything
Forget nothing
Flags pushed by a forceful wind whip his nerves of excitement

Silence

The warrior scream
The surge is as waves eroding the shore of bounteous green
Thunderous thighs pound beneath quivering forelocks
Cool air exhaled rushes past and is left
Past tense
Breath

Eyes to the left
Raging eyes pierce from pale blue paint as scarlet screams
The thunder rolls, swords glisten as enticing Sirens
Contact, a force filled clash of wills and minds plus strength
Clashing swords, ideas beliefs blood plus guts and gore
Dust is kicked and raises past falling victims
Thuds as spuds in sacks
(Land)
Is what it all is for
Face down awkward or upon the broken backs

No time to realise that one who falls is he
Who thought and fought with all his will for all his life
And now just leave him be...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/31/2012 5:00:00 AM
Nice imagery, nice flow... great poem... Terry (& thanks for your kind words9
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Date: 5/30/2012 3:53:00 PM
What amazing action in this deep write. The descriptions are fantastic and I'm the first lucky one to read it! Wow, a 7 for sure. Great work! :)
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Karen Deeks
Date: 5/30/2012 4:21:00 PM
Hello Elizabeth and ty so very much for your kind response... i really am glad you liked this piece... karen :)
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