Wallace Idaho

A nineteen-year-old boy
   from Wallace
         Idaho
who had, until this present time
never set foot beyond the city limits
     or had a drink,
          or kissed a girl;
stood in a sunlit
     steamy
         Asian field
and plunged his bayonet
  deep into the heart
of a fellow human being.
Because he was asked to,
     told to,
        forced to,
            pressured to.
The boy would later
      step gently
on to a landmine
  eviscerating
the lower half of his body;
         and as his intestines
spilled onto the foreign land,
      his lingering glazing eyes
               stared
         questioningly
              into the slowly dimming light.
For the very briefest moment in time
       two peoples were told to hate
             to kill
     as others had before
         as others will do again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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December 3, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Striking poem with many metaphor layers that sometimes touch the deep core of the human being. Best for a win
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Thank you so much
Godwin Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 5:12 AM
I started & wanted to stop, was painful but I kept going because it's been the horrid, violent nightmare for way too many innocents. Is this for Craig's contest? I can't stand war, really can't and I'm an Army brat but there is no footnote by 'thou shall not kill' and often those who want the war, don't fight in them, I know there are many exceptions, many who did die. Good poem, effective - got me off to a bloody start of a day (pretend I'm English, not upset) Effective write, well written
Miller Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 1:46 PM
"It is a subject I come back to often the futility and waste of war, I am a Navy brat and vet, thank you for reading and your comments"
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