Walking With Sorrow

I walk with sorrow
and hear the distant noise of crows and mourning doves, 
in the wet mist
nature's breath rises slowly from the forest floor,
along a path covered by fallen leaves
my hands resting on the cold layered stones,
of a wall built by slaves stretches for miles
their agony releases in mumbled tones,
in my mind as I pass in silence

the crunching sound of each step I take
feels like an intrusion into a time I can't understand
trees rotting, some crushed the wall
where they fell, bring a feeling of anguish to the scene
a coat of terror worn by shadowed death,
from the time of whips and chains

ghostly figures haunt this place
appearing and disappearing over time
floating in the mist, 
as though still pulling rocks from the ground
their fingers covered in blood, staining each one
as they pile one upon another, while the walls grew taller

now crumbled ruins, lost to memory
only crows and doves stand guard here now
their haunting sounds cascading over stones
crying out in sorrow
from a time beyond my comprehension

12/26/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Alex Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:27 PM
"they pile one upon another, while the walls grew taller" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:59 AM
haunting imagery I loved this write Frederic many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:58 AM
A masterpiece,congrats on this big win and have a lovely Weekend Frederic...huggs
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Frederic, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
Ludden Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Buck up, old fellow. There'll be a brighter day tomorrow. Seriously.....Enjoyed as usual. -Dean
Parker Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 4:07 PM
thank you Dean, brighter days, for me yes , for them not so much
Roth Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Another fine poem from you.
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