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Pure fantasy...lol!

Walking With My Eyes Closed

WALKING WITH MY EYES CLOSED

familiar whirr of police siren
grows LARGER and LOUDER
                                                pulling me over

i must exit the driver’s seat
h i c c u p my replies
slur a few white lies

he sure looks sharp
this young man          in blue
but a bit too stern

i enter a plea of please
he shuffles his feet
this awful beast

examines my      eyes and ears
blindfolded i walk the line-----------------------

i steer like a tightrope walker
my      feet feel      the bright white light

it leads me                           across state lines
trolling the line from east to west--------------------

blindsided and tipsy,
a bit giddy      besides

but      sooner or later     i’ll find
an officer      S T R A D D L E D
         over                 me

you see….. i’ve been walking,
 with my eyes closed
…but only in my mind

2/17/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sheehan Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Great write. Very imaginative and real.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Frank!
Godwin Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Very unique - sure held my interest, got the 'I've been pulled over chills', too! Good luck, Kim, and all the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, CayCay!
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:52 PM
GREAT idea for this theme, Kim. It's so cool to see how people approach the different topics!! Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Very descriptive Kim and it Makes me so glad I rarely drink alcohol and I would never drink and drive - too much risk in so many ways:-( hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:33 PM
So true! Thanks.
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