Walking With Fall

Walking under warmth of sun
Sitting on carpet, of fallen leaves
As fall makes the leaves burn,
to orange, red and yellow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 12:25 PM
This is a great verse Arastu. Delightful. Such vivid imagery. Love the last two lines in particular. Glorious autumn depicted so well in your lovely poem. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing. :)
Goyal Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Thanks :-)
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