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Someone asked the poets on this site to write a reversible poem. I liked the idea a great deal, so here is another one.

Death Shocking Nothing left Completely depleted Feeling nothing Walking through the funeral Tears stormed up inside, hidden from all Methodical zombie movements Tears stormed up inside, hidden from all Walking through the funeral Feeling nothing Completely depleted Nothing left Shocking Death

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Date: 9/14/2018 2:50:00 AM
Deftly penned, very evocative both ways!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/14/2018 7:12:00 AM
I like this reversible poem form a lot. I wish it was a choice under type.

Book: Shattered Sighs