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Walking Through the City

The cool breeze on my skin As I wander through the street Listening closely to the sound Of the city's breath and heart beat People's lives intersecting Briefly touching, passing by Contact as evanescent As snowflakes on alluring fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/2/2011 10:30:00 AM
Nice write. I like your use of a metaphor. That shows talent.
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