Patrizia Cohen Poet Dramatic Monologue

Walking Straight Away

Walking straight away
Nowhere to go
Crowded street
But empty way.

My mind hanged to a melody
Flying toward something unreal
But inside the real me
Is stable and safe

Nobody can understand
Nobody can even imagine
But I and myself
Like a treasure box

Step by step
I walk my life
I’m waiting for something
Too much undefined

I lost my past
I cannot reach the future
Flying and flying
With the ghost of my mind.

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2012 at 5:39 AM A lovely poem written exactly one year ago today. - Happy birthday dear poem! :) :) - love from Norway and Anne-Lise

Steven Mossburg December 17, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congratulations on being featured this week. This reminds me of a poem/song by TransSiberian Orchestra "Heal My Soul". Both are full of ache for, as you say, "something". I enjoyed reading this.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 12, 2011 at 7:38 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Patrizia. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2011 at 7:13 PM Congrats on your feature Patrizia, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 13, 2011 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Patrizia. Love, Carol Patrizia Cohen June 13, 2011 at 11:18 AM Thank you very much!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 13, 2011 at 10:15 AM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Patrizia Patrizia Cohen June 13, 2011 at 10:38 AM Thanks a lot!

Skat A June 1, 2011 at 1:26 AM great verses i love the whole thing Luv*Skat