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Walking Out of Life's Mist

When we come into this world we just never know what lies ahead From toddlers to infants to teenagers, life unreels our threads Some find their way in life and move onto better things Others take a different path and internally their heart never sings The fortunate grow old, with friends and families their life's prize But so many are separated by their life, internal songs become internal cries When we come into this world, it's our opportunity to exist Sometimes we have to help each other, by walking out of life's mist http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-8.php

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Date: 5/30/2010 1:00:00 PM
Great write in this one, James..I get some very profound meaning from these lines..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:45:00 PM
I really like that ...WALIKING OUT OF LIFES MIST !!!!! VERY MUCH ... :-)
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:13:00 PM
Beautifully creative and insightful couplets. Really enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:54:00 AM
so well penned and a lesson many should learn only if they can let go of the mothers hand and stand on their own great insight thanks for sharing and keep on penning enjoyed highlander
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful, a wonderful poem, enjoyed by your Eve!
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Date: 5/30/2010 8:25:00 AM
Another beautiful and creative write James I so enjoyed reading this holiday weekend on the beach... with lluv from the "sweetheart"
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:30:00 AM
Awesome reminder to step out and really experience life ~rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:24:00 AM
Those who are surrounded by friends and family in their old age are the fortunate ones, James. Too often seniors live their last days in loneliness. Thanks for reminding us that it's time to walk out of "life's mist" and offer them our support. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:23:00 AM
A nice thoughtful poem and instructive too
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:14:00 AM
This is a wonderful rhyming couplet. One never knows what lies ahead. It's a journey we all have to face. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:10:00 AM
nice , enjoyed,..p.d.
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