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Walking On the Moon

Fifty years ago on the moon went Man

T'was a trip that had long before begun

When he dreamed flying up high

To soar wished and reach the sky

Now planets wants to conquer if he can!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
       21 July 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Michael Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 8:55 AM
And he will eventually...A future write...or is it present...All the best D
Kiser Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 8:09 AM
And I dread it when we do; since we destroy everything we touch.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 11:36 AM
That is what I think too dearest, M.L.K.! Thank you so much! xxx
Gilmour Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 2:24 AM
How can I possibly have a 50 year old son? hahaha...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Hahaha! A forty year old woman? Fifty year old son? Is it possible? LOL! Thank you Ann!
Gilmour Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 1:36 AM
I have always been besotted by the Moon and never tire of gazing at her through my binoculars - magical. I was pregnant with my son when they landed upon her; he was born in December '69 and I called him Neil! Loved your limerick dear Demetrios. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Trifiatis Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 1:45 AM
How could you forget such an event when your life is so close related to that event dearest, Ann. Thank you for your gracious visit and for telling me your personal story. Now everybody knows how old ylur son is! Hahaha! God bless you both!
Y. Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Hi Demitrios, Wow! It's been that long ago since "man" walked on the moon? Good limerick. I enjoyed the read my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Yes, it is incredible how they achieved it with so little technology in comparison with today's one. It took a lot of ingenuity and courage to overcome difficulties presented . Thank you Alexis. Were you around back then? Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 12:49 PM
- Amazing ... 50 years ago ... we all remember it - You couldn't live on the moon (not me either) ... no flowers :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 1:31 PM
True, I would never like to go! So boring! Thank you my dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 3:05 AM
nice one Demetrios, you sure you haven't been to limerick lol. Strange though, mans been to the moon fifty years ago and seems to have stopped, his thirst for exploration should have by now taken him out of our galaxy. Upwards and onwards. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 3:36 AM
...probably I have flown overhead it. Does it count? Hahaha. Yes, one wonders why for fifty years and with so much better technology haven't done anything spectacular. Thank you dear, Tom for your kind visit and comment!
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