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Walking On Sydney Harbour Bridge

steel beams
reach across space
poised
seas moving beneath sound
the salty breath-test of time

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Paul Callus

July 25, 2016 at 5:10 PM

You paint a striking picture, Michael; the sea has passed its test...it's the bridge that's trying to convince us that it too is long lasting! // paul

Michael Dom

August 2, 2016 at 11:09 AM

Hi Paul, I missed this comment earlier on, thanks for visiting this tanka again.

Divine Friday Idiong

July 14, 2016 at 5:44 AM

A great poem with such brevity. Good piece Michael Dom ;)

Poet Destroyer A

February 18, 2016 at 1:57 AM

LOVE IT. LINDA

Skat A

December 19, 2015 at 11:38 PM

Michael, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"

Pandita Sietesantos

December 6, 2015 at 3:08 PM

Michael, I visited the Sydney Harbour Bridge many years ago when I visited Australia, and it is indeed an unforgettable experience! Thank you for awakening the memories with your awesome imagery! Pandita

Michael Dom

December 6, 2015 at 11:43 PM

hey Pandita, glad to share the memory with you - cheers!