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Walking On Sydney Harbour Bridge

steel beams reach across space poised seas moving beneath sound the salty breath-test of time

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2016 5:10:00 PM

You paint a striking picture, Michael; the sea has passed its test...it's the bridge that's trying to convince us that it too is long lasting! // paul

Michael Dom
Date: 8/2/2016 11:09:00 AM

Hi Paul, I missed this comment earlier on, thanks for visiting this tanka again.

Divine Friday Idiong

Date: 7/14/2016 5:44:00 AM

A great poem with such brevity. Good piece Michael Dom ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 1:57:00 AM

LOVE IT. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 11:38:00 PM

Michael, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 3:08:00 PM

Michael, I visited the Sydney Harbour Bridge many years ago when I visited Australia, and it is indeed an unforgettable experience! Thank you for awakening the memories with your awesome imagery! Pandita

Michael Dom
Date: 12/6/2015 11:43:00 PM

hey Pandita, glad to share the memory with you - cheers!