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- Walking Near the Waters - 4

WALKING NEAR THE WATERS


Under  the  warm  golden  hug  of sunrise’s bliss
shielded  by  rugged ridges  and flagging  trees
emerged a peaceful scene.

Through   the   clear,  somber,  sleeping,  water
sunlight  revealed shadows  spelling  odes beneath;
odes unfolded by rising ripples in  cerulean gleam,
touched  by  nothing but  the gliding  breeze which 
seizes silt and shingles causing baby currents lift.
Sparkling  like priced pearls  in  the  still  noon,
their waves, a calm heart’s pulse, speak.
 
I linger, tranquil, afloat in the ageless ocean’s
lea, sitting on a dry old rock-sheltered bank,
drinking the healing power from the scene.

Time is suspend; I see the lake like a child,
the  ridges and trees, His grand legions line.
The shadows stretch, His noble progress to a life
unfurled  during  years of  swarming  battles.
But,  He has a wealth of hope and stood amidst
the  sudden  ripples; unmoved by fear, for He
can hold the shifts. He who’s polished  tough 
and  wise  has  championed  in a sunken time.
He  matured.  He populated  good  influence
calling others to imitate his stance. He promised

life without fear cherished with gratitude, and
his shared touch was not dulled by passing years.
His memory endured, so many remember Him.
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~Inspired by the painting: Lake by Georgia Engelhard ~

***For the painting, Debbi Guzzi's Ten Paintings, Ten Poems, Not for a Contest, thanks for the wonderful experience.

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
9:17am, January 14, 2015
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Inman Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
What a gorgeous poem Olive.
Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:12 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Wonderful poetry to this image Olive. Again I'm smiling for you as you pull a poem from this painting, nice one ~~ James xx
Callus Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Very beautiful...truly inspired...love the imagery...the sense of tranquility ... and the creative ability. Well done Olive_eloi:) ~ Hugs // paul
Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Your foot note says thanks for the experience..i say the same for having read this wonderful poetry...
Nunez Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Ah, you take me there, Olive. Your personality shines through your writes...sweet, kind and a refreshing spirit. This is lovely! hugs :-)
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Olive, you are always at your best... SKAT
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 4:39 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`)
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 6:05 PM
very descriptive with beautiful images, Olive. Keep up the good work with your ten poems!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 4:00 AM
thanks much Andrea.. =`) weeee!
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Absolutely fantastic Olive, so inspirational!! Best wishes, jean
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 3:47 AM
thanks much Jean.. =`) Im glad you like it.. =`)
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