Walking In the Garden

no clouds impede my light, but the eclipse ~ ~ ~ the totality wingspan ~ ~ ~ i’m under its shadow 5/10/2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/11/2018 9:18:00 AM

I like the contrast of light and shadow, so moving in so few words!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Michelle! :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/11/2018 9:02:00 AM

Kim, this is beautiful, I've not tried this form, I love what you did here Happy Friday xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thanks, Mike! Happy Friday, dear Mike! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2018 4:47:00 AM

Captivating! Each time I will walk on my roof garden this marvelous writing will come to mind dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 6:30:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much, dear Demetrios! :):)