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Walking In the Garden

no clouds impede my light, but the eclipse ~ ~ ~ the totality wingspan ~ ~ ~ i’m under its shadow 5/10/2018

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Date: 5/11/2018 9:18:00 AM
I like the contrast of light and shadow, so moving in so few words!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Michelle! :)
Date: 5/11/2018 9:02:00 AM
Kim, this is beautiful, I've not tried this form, I love what you did here Happy Friday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks, Mike! Happy Friday, dear Mike! :)
Date: 5/11/2018 4:47:00 AM
Captivating! Each time I will walk on my roof garden this marvelous writing will come to mind dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2018 6:30:00 AM
Oh, thanks so much, dear Demetrios! :):)

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