Walking In the Garden

no clouds impede my light, but the eclipse ~ ~ ~ the totality wingspan ~ ~ ~ i’m under its shadow 5/10/2018
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Faulkner Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:18 AM
I like the contrast of light and shadow, so moving in so few words!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thanks a bunch, Michelle! :)
Gentile Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Kim, this is beautiful, I've not tried this form, I love what you did here Happy Friday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thanks, Mike! Happy Friday, dear Mike! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Captivating! Each time I will walk on my roof garden this marvelous writing will come to mind dear, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Oh, thanks so much, dear Demetrios! :):)
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