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'walking Away'

You walked away with a smile on your face Never suspected it would be your last say The words goodbye never dripped from your lips The words goodbye never crossed my mind We were in this forever, That abruptly became today Forever and a day is what they say your forever changed like the seasons All in one day I let you be my forever, Eternally yours Even in my dreams, The beginning had little hints of an ending Here I stand, with my heart on my sleeve Do you recognize the pieces? Some of it ripped away On driftwood, an aimless journey searching, indecisive and yet it still remembers to beat… Contest: Free Your Mind 9th Place

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Date: 3/14/2011 8:28:00 PM
Wilma, here is a winners' list I am finally getting around to. How nice to see you on it with this sweet poem that I recall seeing before Congratulations to you!
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:12:00 AM
Knew this was a winner. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:25:00 PM
What a very sad write Wilma but that last stanza I really liked -- amazing lines you got there, missy! How odd that forever ends, huh? This is such a moving poem and happy to see you among Chris' winners! hugs to you :) I hope Wednesday is treating you right! :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:43:00 PM
Glad to have caught up with you again, Wilma, this is so good, profound and sad. congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:36:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on another great win my friend in Chris's contest ... most amazing words ..always enjoy your writes luv..
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:50:00 PM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:52:00 PM
fantastic, this is great , congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Chris, Wilma
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:43:00 AM
Such a melancholy poem of loss....this is softly sad, but beautiful!! Lovely work, Wilma!! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:22:00 PM
oh,wonderful ending, it still remembers to beat. showing forth hope springs eternal! Nice to see your poem here today, Wilma!
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:26:00 PM
Such a touching and heartwrenching poem, Wilma. We never know when wer're going to say our last goodbyes, so it's important to make sure people who are special to us always know they are loved. If you lose someone to death, the memories linger but our hearts do still keep beating. Sometimes we wish our hearts would stop, but we have to accept God's plan. Love your poem. Many of us can relate to this. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:03:00 PM
A sad and emotional write on loss.. your words touch me, but then again you know that...love Michael
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