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Walking alone

Walking alone on this meandering path not even a shadow of myself by my side a cloud of silence surrounds me I hear only my silent footsteps reciting poems from our short lived past Sometimes I stop hoping to hear your footsteps too growing towards my direction to complement with mine to reminisce over things we had dreamed of and when I hear nothing at all I keep walking ahead thinking that you might have left me behind walking alone on this broken path I wonder if your love was an illusion; a mirage and if I should cremate these memories of me and you or if I should preserve them as architects for my future sometimes I stop trying to locate you or at least the place where I lost you and when I fail I keep walking ahead hoping that somewhere not too far the paths we follow will converge and there we will meet to reunite and agree which way to walk………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/28/2014 11:29:00 AM
PT B... enjoyed... SKAT
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:16:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on loneliness and congrats on the fine win, Bojosi
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:51:00 PM
Another lovely win Bojosi, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:14:00 PM
Bojosi, , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:57:00 AM
congratulations!
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:37:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:06:00 PM
this was a poignant, introspective piece, and something about it really pulled at me...I thought it was very well written, simple yet layered at the same time - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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