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WALKING

Whisper of earth rising to meet each step.
Air brushing the edges of thought.
Light pooling in small, wandering moments.
Kind silence opening like a hidden gate.
Inward paths brightening beneath the outer ones.
Nothing hurried, nothing held.
Grace moving with me, almost unseen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 9:44 PM
Yes, ,'inward paths brighten beneath the outer ones as we walk '..so true. Beautiful thoughts dear Sara.
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 3:41 PM
nice walk :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Lovely ~ serene
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