Elaine Perrin Poet Rhyme

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Walk With Me Tonight

Will Thee walk with me tonight ?
Amongst the spirits of Twilight
Gothic verse we wilt recite
I wilt gage not to bite

Wilt thee with me slowly dance ? 
As we descend into lover’s trance
With thy charm thee doth enchant
Speak thy wishes
For thee I’ll grant 

Both frozen in the midst of time
Our soulless bodies wilt entwine
Flush lips of blood sip scarlet wine
On those lips I yearn to dine

Permit my domination, let reality depart 
Allow me to enter thy beauteous blackened heart
I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk
Within is a hunger, replete with lust

Cometh let us now abscond
Dip our toes in reaper’s pond
Milk the moon so we may swim
Filling it’s juices to the brim

Bathe with me in lacteous splendour
Mine hands around thy waist so slender 
Our bodies melt to form a bond
And as we fuse I doth respond 

So bid me now to take thy hand
And lead thee to a world so grand 
We will liveth still into this night 
Eternally dancing beneath spellbinding moonlight

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Bean Pole February 12, 2025 at 5:12 PM I do luv this piece. As I was reading I was reminded of lovers past and those who might yet come. Thank you!

Silent One November 13, 2019 at 1:36 AM Loved the use of language here...Great use of vocabulary to create dark imagery.. Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 5:35 AM Thank you, so happy you enjoyed it :-) x

Darlene De Beaulieu November 12, 2019 at 2:29 PM Hello Elaine Perrin, as i read this poem i felt i was part of this poem. i enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 5:33 AM That’s so lovely to hear! Thank you so much Darlene :-) x

Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 4:07 PM Your words are darkly inclined, Elaine, and gothic romance drips from every line...mysterious and sensual. Regards // paul Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 5:29 AM Thank you for your kind words Paul. They are very much appreciated:-) x

Timothy Mcguire October 23, 2019 at 7:55 PM Absolutely fabulous! A fav for me. Elaine Perrin October 25, 2019 at 7:16 AM Thank you so much Timothy :-) x

Brenda Chiri October 17, 2019 at 6:09 PM Such beauty within your words no matter if they be dark or not! You too write of romance perfectly!;) Elaine Perrin October 20, 2019 at 12:10 PM Thank you so much lovely lady :-) x

Gershon Wolf October 16, 2019 at 12:09 PM Oooh! This is good! I was just entranced by the setting, the sensuality, the flow...There should be a contest for this to win, Elaine!! Wow! Warm wishes, Gershon Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:44 AM Thank you Gershon for your kind comments :-) x

John Gondolf October 14, 2019 at 5:18 PM Wow, Elaine, this poem captured me from beginning to end. A beautifully written sensual, dark piece. My best to you. Hugs, John Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:44 AM Thank you so much John :-) x

Damian Keady October 14, 2019 at 4:11 PM Amazing! I read and then i look again, reread and listen to the song of the poem. its like the rewind button on all my devises.. when something is good you just keep going back to it. This one has had me in rewind mode all evening. If that makes sense ... doh! Just loving your writes Elaine as they grab me.. but i am not a poet just an appreciative fan.. Best Damo xx Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:46 AM Fantastic! I’m so happy you enjoyed it Damian. Thank you so much :-) x

Gordon Mcconnell October 13, 2019 at 4:38 PM A rather fine piece Elaine, nice rhyme and flow with great imagery as well as being dark and sensual. Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:46 AM Thank you Gordon :-) x

James Inman October 13, 2019 at 1:57 PM Sensual, dark and very appealing. Your word choices give your poem a feel of gothic fantasy. Is it inspired by the movie? Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:49 AM Thank you so much James :-) By the music from the movie as I had it on whilst I was writing x

Silent One October 13, 2019 at 1:28 PM This is just brilliant, so dark... Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:49 AM Thank you Silent one :-) x

Panagiota Romios October 13, 2019 at 12:55 PM Oh, I love this Elaine. Very well writeen from beginning to end. Panagiota Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 6:50 AM Thank you Panagiota :-) x

Winged Warrior October 13, 2019 at 8:12 AM Thou suck'th thy nite, for the undead do'th bite lol...a well crafted gothic lustful write, Ellaine...don't know if I wanna walk with you though lol...maybe a hop skip & a jump will suffice'th lol...^WW^ :o) Elaine Perrin October 13, 2019 at 8:37 AM Lol thank you ^WW^ for your kind feedback, you don’t know what you’re missing! ;-) x

Quoth Theraven October 12, 2019 at 12:00 PM Elaine, Oh you Shakespearean time traveler. With so rapture'd write of lover's touch. ") "I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk Within is a hunger, replete with lust".. "The lady doth protest too much". Very intriguing write, right for the season. -Shakespeare & Elaine Elaine Perrin October 13, 2019 at 5:36 AM Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this. I wasn’t sure how it would turn out as no matter how hard I try I can’t stop making everything rhyme lol :-) x

Sandra Adams October 12, 2019 at 11:46 AM wow...hauntingly sensual...i love the feel of this piece, great poem Elaine! :) hugs Elaine Perrin October 13, 2019 at 5:33 AM Thanks so much Sandra :-) x

Richard Lamoureux October 12, 2019 at 11:04 AM Cold blood has never flowed hotter. I enjoyed your passionate piece. Well done! Elaine Perrin October 13, 2019 at 5:33 AM So glad you enjoyed it Richard thank you :-) x

Vijay Pandit October 12, 2019 at 6:51 AM WOW! An exotic night of romance...a superb write, Elaine. Elaine Perrin October 12, 2019 at 9:42 AM Thanks so much Vijay :-) x