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Walk With Me Tonight

Will Thee walk with me tonight ?
Amongst the spirits of Twilight
Gothic verse we wilt recite
I wilt gage not to bite

Wilt thee with me slowly dance ? 
As we descend into lover’s trance
With thy charm thee doth enchant
Speak thy wishes
For thee I’ll grant 

Both frozen in the midst of time
Our soulless bodies wilt entwine
Flush lips of blood sip scarlet wine
On those lips I yearn to dine

Permit my domination, let reality depart 
Allow me to enter thy beauteous blackened heart
I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk
Within is a hunger, replete with lust

Cometh let us now abscond
Dip our toes in reaper’s pond
Milk the moon so we may swim
Filling it’s juices to the brim

Bathe with me in lacteous splendour
Mine hands around thy waist so slender 
Our bodies melt to form a bond
And as we fuse I doth respond 

So bid me now to take thy hand
And lead thee to a world so grand 
We will liveth still into this night 
Eternally dancing beneath spellbinding moonlight

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Bean Pole Date: 2/12/2025 5:12:00 PM I do luv this piece. As I was reading I was reminded of lovers past and those who might yet come. Thank you! Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/13/2019 1:36:00 AM Loved the use of language here...Great use of vocabulary to create dark imagery.. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 11/13/2019 5:35:00 AM Thank you, so happy you enjoyed it :-) x

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/12/2019 2:29:00 PM Hello Elaine Perrin, as i read this poem i felt i was part of this poem. i enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 11/13/2019 5:33:00 AM That’s so lovely to hear! Thank you so much Darlene :-) x

Paul Callus Date: 11/8/2019 4:07:00 PM Your words are darkly inclined, Elaine, and gothic romance drips from every line...mysterious and sensual. Regards // paul Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 11/13/2019 5:29:00 AM Thank you for your kind words Paul. They are very much appreciated:-) x

Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/23/2019 7:55:00 PM Absolutely fabulous! A fav for me. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/25/2019 7:16:00 AM Thank you so much Timothy :-) x

Brenda Chiri Date: 10/17/2019 6:09:00 PM Such beauty within your words no matter if they be dark or not! You too write of romance perfectly!;) Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/20/2019 12:10:00 PM Thank you so much lovely lady :-) x

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/16/2019 12:09:00 PM Oooh! This is good! I was just entranced by the setting, the sensuality, the flow...There should be a contest for this to win, Elaine!! Wow! Warm wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:44:00 AM Thank you Gershon for your kind comments :-) x

John Gondolf Date: 10/14/2019 5:18:00 PM Wow, Elaine, this poem captured me from beginning to end. A beautifully written sensual, dark piece. My best to you. Hugs, John Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:44:00 AM Thank you so much John :-) x

Damian Keady Date: 10/14/2019 4:11:00 PM Amazing! I read and then i look again, reread and listen to the song of the poem. its like the rewind button on all my devises.. when something is good you just keep going back to it. This one has had me in rewind mode all evening. If that makes sense ... doh! Just loving your writes Elaine as they grab me.. but i am not a poet just an appreciative fan.. Best Damo xx Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:46:00 AM Fantastic! I’m so happy you enjoyed it Damian. Thank you so much :-) x

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 10/13/2019 4:38:00 PM A rather fine piece Elaine, nice rhyme and flow with great imagery as well as being dark and sensual. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:46:00 AM Thank you Gordon :-) x

James Inman Date: 10/13/2019 1:57:00 PM Sensual, dark and very appealing. Your word choices give your poem a feel of gothic fantasy. Is it inspired by the movie? Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:49:00 AM Thank you so much James :-) By the music from the movie as I had it on whilst I was writing x

Silent One Date: 10/13/2019 1:28:00 PM This is just brilliant, so dark... Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:49:00 AM Thank you Silent one :-) x

Panagiota Romios Date: 10/13/2019 12:55:00 PM Oh, I love this Elaine. Very well writeen from beginning to end. Panagiota Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/17/2019 6:50:00 AM Thank you Panagiota :-) x

Winged Warrior Date: 10/13/2019 8:12:00 AM Thou suck'th thy nite, for the undead do'th bite lol...a well crafted gothic lustful write, Ellaine...don't know if I wanna walk with you though lol...maybe a hop skip & a jump will suffice'th lol...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/13/2019 8:37:00 AM Lol thank you ^WW^ for your kind feedback, you don’t know what you’re missing! ;-) x

Quoth Theraven Date: 10/12/2019 12:00:00 PM Elaine, Oh you Shakespearean time traveler. With so rapture'd write of lover's touch. ") "I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk Within is a hunger, replete with lust".. "The lady doth protest too much". Very intriguing write, right for the season. -Shakespeare & Elaine Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/13/2019 5:36:00 AM Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this. I wasn’t sure how it would turn out as no matter how hard I try I can’t stop making everything rhyme lol :-) x

Sandra Adams Date: 10/12/2019 11:46:00 AM wow...hauntingly sensual...i love the feel of this piece, great poem Elaine! :) hugs Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/13/2019 5:33:00 AM Thanks so much Sandra :-) x

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/12/2019 11:04:00 AM Cold blood has never flowed hotter. I enjoyed your passionate piece. Well done! Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/13/2019 5:33:00 AM So glad you enjoyed it Richard thank you :-) x

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/12/2019 6:51:00 AM WOW! An exotic night of romance...a superb write, Elaine. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/12/2019 9:42:00 AM Thanks so much Vijay :-) x