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Walk With Me Tonight

Will Thee walk with me tonight ? Amongst the spirits of Twilight Gothic verse we wilt recite I wilt gage not to bite Wilt thee with me slowly dance ? As we descend into lover’s trance With thy charm thee doth enchant Speak thy wishes For thee I’ll grant Both frozen in the midst of time Our soulless bodies wilt entwine Flush lips of blood sip scarlet wine On those lips I yearn to dine Permit my domination, let reality depart Allow me to enter thy beauteous blackened heart I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk Within is a hunger, replete with lust Cometh let us now abscond Dip our toes in reaper’s pond Milk the moon so we may swim Filling it’s juices to the brim Bathe with me in lacteous splendour Mine hands around thy waist so slender Our bodies melt to form a bond And as we fuse I doth respond So bid me now to take thy hand And lead thee to a world so grand We will liveth still into this night Eternally dancing beneath spellbinding moonlight

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Silent One

Date: 11/13/2019 1:36:00 AM

Loved the use of language here...Great use of vocabulary to create dark imagery..

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 5:35:00 AM

Thank you, so happy you enjoyed it :-) x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/12/2019 2:29:00 PM

Hello Elaine Perrin, as i read this poem i felt i was part of this poem. i enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 5:33:00 AM

That’s so lovely to hear! Thank you so much Darlene :-) x

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2019 4:07:00 PM

Your words are darkly inclined, Elaine, and gothic romance drips from every line...mysterious and sensual. Regards // paul

Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 5:29:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Paul. They are very much appreciated:-) x

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/23/2019 7:55:00 PM

Absolutely fabulous! A fav for me.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/25/2019 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Timothy :-) x

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/17/2019 6:09:00 PM

Such beauty within your words no matter if they be dark or not! You too write of romance perfectly!;)

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/20/2019 12:10:00 PM

Thank you so much lovely lady :-) x

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/16/2019 12:09:00 PM

Oooh! This is good! I was just entranced by the setting, the sensuality, the flow...There should be a contest for this to win, Elaine!! Wow! Warm wishes, Gershon

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Gershon for your kind comments :-) x

John Gondolf

Date: 10/14/2019 5:18:00 PM

Wow, Elaine, this poem captured me from beginning to end. A beautifully written sensual, dark piece. My best to you. Hugs, John

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:44:00 AM

Thank you so much John :-) x

Damian Keady

Date: 10/14/2019 4:11:00 PM

Amazing! I read and then i look again, reread and listen to the song of the poem. its like the rewind button on all my devises.. when something is good you just keep going back to it. This one has had me in rewind mode all evening. If that makes sense ... doh! Just loving your writes Elaine as they grab me.. but i am not a poet just an appreciative fan.. Best Damo xx

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:46:00 AM

Fantastic! I’m so happy you enjoyed it Damian. Thank you so much :-) x

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/13/2019 4:38:00 PM

A rather fine piece Elaine, nice rhyme and flow with great imagery as well as being dark and sensual.

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Gordon :-) x

James Inman

Date: 10/13/2019 1:57:00 PM

Sensual, dark and very appealing. Your word choices give your poem a feel of gothic fantasy. Is it inspired by the movie?

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:49:00 AM

Thank you so much James :-) By the music from the movie as I had it on whilst I was writing x

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2019 1:28:00 PM

This is just brilliant, so dark...

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Silent one :-) x

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/13/2019 12:55:00 PM

Oh, I love this Elaine. Very well writeen from beginning to end. Panagiota

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota :-) x

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/13/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thou suck'th thy nite, for the undead do'th bite lol...a well crafted gothic lustful write, Ellaine...don't know if I wanna walk with you though lol...maybe a hop skip & a jump will suffice'th lol...^WW^ :o)

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/13/2019 8:37:00 AM

Lol thank you ^WW^ for your kind feedback, you don’t know what you’re missing! ;-) x

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/12/2019 12:00:00 PM

Elaine, Oh you Shakespearean time traveler. With so rapture'd write of lover's touch. ") "I implore thee anon, mine beauty of dusk Within is a hunger, replete with lust".. "The lady doth protest too much". Very intriguing write, right for the season. -Shakespeare & Elaine

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/13/2019 5:36:00 AM

Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this. I wasn’t sure how it would turn out as no matter how hard I try I can’t stop making everything rhyme lol :-) x