Walk With Me

Walk With Me

       I said, "Look at the mess I've made."
He said, "Take my hand and don't be afraid."
       I said, "But I feel so ashamed."
He said,  "I love you son and you're the reason I came."

       I said, "What about those dark days ahead?"
He said, "My love will be nourishment and keep you well fed."
       I said, "I'm not brave tell me what to do."
He said, "Believe in me and I'll carry you through."

       I said, "Okay Father, teach me to be a man."
He said, "I love you my son now take my hand."
       I said, "My soul is Yours for eternity."
He said, "I'm proud of you my son, now walk with me."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/27/2010 9:50:00 AM
Hey, Handsome, Something funny happened. I thought I'd left comments here and when I came back to read this poem again...my comments were erased??? N-e-way, like I said before, Awesome poem! One of your best! One move fav.! He will be with you always! He loves you just as you are. Peace and much love to you, Audrey*
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Date: 1/27/2010 9:20:00 AM
So beautiful Jimmy,Yes he loves you,he does indeed and he is proud of you too...great writer--Charma:)
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:43:00 AM
I love this one. It goes in my favs! This is so inspirational and speaks with so much love and truth. Bravo! Smiles form Lolita~ and I know He is proud!
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