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08/26/24

Hybronnet

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Contest by Constance La France

WALK OUT

  ' Better to walk out than to live in Fool’s Paradise.' - Poet

       She had full faith that her love was honoured,
      but marital life stood on bricks of lie.
      Hit of thunderbolt from clear cloudless sky.
      knocking her down on shock to paralyse.
      She lived happily in Fool's Paradise.
      Wheel of truth whirling just automatic.
     She faced bare fact and acted pragmatic.
     To drag conjugal life turned awkward.

       Compulsive ' Break Up ' to proceed onward 
      Emptiness embowered: : She wished to cry,
      but controlled  herself and just said ' Good Bye' '
      No question to adjust or to compromise.
      So far, amour to  appear as fake guise.
      Inevitable divorce to  discard.
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