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Walk On By

Anguished stares and pleading eyes; beg for food with empty bowls. And abject poverty thrives, as death stalks forgotten souls. Foul odors cling to the air; as hunger develops claws. And the pain is hard to bear; when starvation bites and gnaws. Bellies growl at passersby while the weak stumble and fall. But hard hearts ignore their cry; and cripples are forced to crawl. At night, alone with their fears, sleep morphs into nightmare screams. For young faces etched with tears; find no happiness in dreams. Their treatment is inhumane; yet people still walk on by. And subjected to disdain; these children are left to die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/9/2018 9:22:00 AM
Powerful portrayal of the inhumane. Your compassion in this and many of your other poems is truly beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 3/9/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your support and friendly visits are most encouraging and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 11:34:00 PM
BIG congrats this one deserved to be on the list for SURE.
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Date: 7/25/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 2:35:00 AM
SUCH a powerful poem Emile - the image and the imagery are so so vivid I felt a chill run down my spine - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your warm words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 1:23:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Emile!
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 12:26:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your support, as always and forever. Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 11:47:00 PM
Utterly superb writing for that contest, Emile. And I see you got approval from the judge as well. You are on fire with this one. it's so heartbreaking and right to the point!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 4:56:00 PM
I never thought my heart could cry until I read this. And it even goes on in our own country. The homeless, the poor the suffering. Out reach is there, but will never be enough! What is the answer? A 7. Your poem is made to make each one of us stop and think, am I doing enough? Or will there always be guilt there when our stomach are full? ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene, I appreciate your warm words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 1:48:00 PM
Deeply touched. Inhumane indeed!It's incredible what humans can do to each other and what they won't do for each other. Thank you for this fine write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Michael, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 9:39:00 AM
Touched this reader so deep, Emile. Made me question myself too. Did I really think the small change I gave was enough? Or just enough to appease my conscience?...You are a hard-biting reporter if you are one. The viewer watching the news sitting comfortably on a soft couch eating midnight snacks would loose his appetite and be pricked in his concience... Salute!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim...your comments are insightful and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 6:44:00 AM
This is definitely a winner Emile :) You really did an exceptional job with this poem my friend. Well done. I love the message you bring across, the flow and the emotion in this piece. Keep writing. Hugs B
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Be, I appreciate your warm words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/21/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the contest in the serious way I meant it. Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Debbie, hunger is a serious topic and deserves to be addressed as such. Emile.
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