Walk On By

life passes by
changes quickly like 
the green grass
and passes like 
a fading shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Vaughn Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 5:58 AM
I like it...
Malebranche Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 9:39 AM
This is so true...we need to make every second count...
Langston-Moran Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 5:33 AM
Deneen. Lovely economy of words so beautifully crafted. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. I just learned last night that my ex-husband killled himself and today is so sad for me. And your words hit home just now...so true...so true. Patricia
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November 6, 2008 at 7:01 PM
So very true are your words my friend. That is why it is important to make the best of the time we have and enjoy the fullnest there of. I thank you D-nyce for sharing the read and for your lovely comments concerning Intended's :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Mc Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 7:30 AM
HOW TRUE IT IS!! THIS COULD GO ON A MAGNET! TERRIFIC!! GEM!
Winter Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 9:50 AM
I feel Kristin's comment more and more every day. Yet I am not quite where she is yet. Yes, well said, indeed it does. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:21 AM
Yes it does, but there is only one moment, it is eternal. love Kristin
Fawcett Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 2:23 AM
Isn't that the truth! Beautifully written and so poetic Deneen. Love, Nigel
Torres Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:02 PM
Very true and well thought off Deneen where have you been? Blessings to you my dear. Michael Torres
Jordan Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 9:00 PM
Deneen that sure is the truth - I learned a lot about life and time over the course of my life - Deneen would you please pray for me - God Bless, Michael
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