Walk Down

Taking a walk down
I hope it’s not very hot
Didn’t check in Hell
Used get out of Hell free card
Now will stop smell the roses

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 8, 2012 at 7:04 PM
Great idea with that card, Russell! How about a get into heaven free card too..?...Many will get in by the skin of their teeth so we better get some of those cards circulating!...nice ending...Gwendolen
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May 5, 2012 at 9:08 PM
hahaha, I really enjoyed this, get out of hell free!!! yep, that is the card we all need!!
Wesley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Wonder where you live, must be down south but it's hot and muggy here today. I'm smelling lilacs today but roses coming soon!
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