Notes About The Poem

Walk Away

I look at friends that have been married 30 years or more,
They seem so happy and blessed with their grandkids to adore.
Now I’m divorced… is it because I chose the wrong one?
He was the stars, the moon, and my rising sun.

I look back, and try to sweep the bad things under the rug,
But God saw the heartache, and decided to pull the plug.
Everything happens for a reason, so they say…
Sometimes the only thing you can do is walk away.






10/22/17
Contest 236 Any Form, Any Topic Max of 16 Lines
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Awarded 7th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Grasso Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Nicely written, Brenda. Congratulations! ...Fran
Mcgrath Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Fran.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Mixed bag of life. Congrats, Brenda?
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:02 PM
God is good! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:02 PM
God is good! <3
Mcgrath Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Thanks for the congrats Kim :)
Mcgrath Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Yes it is a mixed bag of life for me. But I still have plenty to be thankful for. This Thanksgiving season and Christmas is the perfect opportunity to give thanks. Thank you Lord, for all my blessings!
Selfa Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations Brenda! I am so proud of you. You have accomplished a lot. I look forward to seeing even more blessings come to you in the future. - Hans
Mcgrath Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:28 PM
I made a typo on your name Hans. Sorry, I am excited. :)
Mcgrath Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:26 PM
I was #7. Yea!!! I am in the top 10. Thank you God. And thank you for your comments Hans. You don't know how important your comments and fellow poets are to me!!! :)
Mcgrath Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Zans! Did I win? I will look and see. :)
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:30 AM
A true picture of a heartache in a relationship.... Congrats Brenda, for having it placed in the contest!!! ;-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Hello Brenda, yes you did the right thing to walk away. This is a lovely poem.
Mcgrath Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Sands Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Oh, that is a good piece of writing. It really shows the feelings and I can understand completely. Take care.
Mcgrath Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Heidi.
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