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Walk Away

I have been walking in a dark cave For quite a long time Never felt more caged and jailed As if I’ve committed a heinous crime! Demons live under our beds they say You live in the house and come To my bed everyday It’s much more than what you tear away! I closed my eyes to what I feel and see Defeated and bruised I stand up And walk to that door Hurt slowly seeping out of my core! The knife digging into my spirit Threatening to pierce my soul I choose not to ignore it any more Strength I carry with a patient heart I now chose to make a brand new start Those who suffer have an eye for suffering I’ve come to understand life is an exchange You lose something and yet you gain That’s a simple deal But no one tells you what to do Till you yourself stand up from The shame you feel, and walk away! 23.6.22 Contest: 2022 Marathon Mile 4 Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 6/24/2022 9:02:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. We all have our burdens. Sara
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/24/2022 11:07:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara.....Yes we all do.
Date: 6/23/2022 4:39:00 AM
Defeated then strong…..love this poem Carol I felt both emotions….well written….Debx
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/23/2022 5:04:00 AM
Yes you got that right... Thank you I am glad it resonates with you :)

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