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YOUNGER: The truth be told why would I do what you suggest put on your shoe and take a quest Just look, behold my tattered shoes Hush Puppies they'd be naught bark nor snooze so why pick me OLDER: You talk so bold of how little I have known old am I, naught a child aged I am and much I've sown my shoes gone more than a mile YOUNGER: I'm in the cold for me to know your life to be wear your shoes as you've asked walk a mile, naught you just me your trials revealed, in this arduous task My soul I sold for what do I care his life to be now I've walked the mile and it revealed his new shoes, to me he did endow faraway, much he taught and yielded Date: 06/10/2019

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Date: 6/10/2019 1:54:00 PM
A very interesting, creative poem with insight and depth. Well done :)
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Date: 6/10/2019 2:00:00 PM
My thanks to your visit and comment both Heidi, Aloha William

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