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Image result for pictures of mockingbirds fighting crowsThis is not a specific kind of Haiku and is not intended to match up with any syllable or word count. 

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crow walks fence checking out birdfeeders.... mockingbird defends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 4:36 PM
just a pleasant Haiku! enjoyed the tree-bound conflict. hugs, SAra B
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 5:08 AM
Sara B., those mockingbirds astound me with their mighty nature to defend their young and territory. Thank you for stopping by. Sara K
Buehler Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 7:11 PM
This backyard drama is fascinating and beautifully evoked, Sara. I enjoyed it a lot.
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 3:59 AM
I am delighted you enjoyed it, Evelyn. Your visit is delightful. Sara K
Poet Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Stunning imagery, scene-based outlines, and a strikingly smart closing line. A whimsical haiku, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 1:38 AM
I could almost picture this. Great idea.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:06 AM
Awesome, Victor. I am glad you got the picture. Sara K
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 1:00 AM
So cute loved this!
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:05 AM
Arthur, I haven't heard from you in a while. Glad to see you back. I appreciate the review. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 10:12 PM
Superb imagery, scene depiction, and extremely clever end line. A wonderful haiku, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:04 AM
I needed this comment this morning, Howard. I am worn out and it is just out of bed time what will the end of day be? Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 8:58 PM
A nice little image in nature, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:03 AM
I've seen mockingbirds chase snakes across the yard, Andrea. They are such brave birds. Thank you for dropping by . Sara K
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 5:40 PM
a play on opposites: the 'aha' in the end was amazing, sara... lovely ku!
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:02 AM
Nette, your high praise is uplifting. It made my morning. Sara K
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