Walk

the last time
i walked away....

i thought it was
for good

the last time you
walked away

i knew you would be
back later; after your
fun was spent

but....the next
time if i walk 
away...then

what you won't expect
from me ......


is my trust is gone
FOREVER, even tho
i love you.....

i will never be back
again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/30/2009 4:48:00 PM
Yes we must demand to be treated well. I wrote on this subject it might be of help. The is I Saw You....Light & Love
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Date: 6/13/2009 7:16:00 AM
Stand your ground. People accept what they believe they deserve. Accept nothing less than the best. Believe that!! Vince
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Date: 6/6/2009 1:02:00 PM
Hope he knows what a warm-hearted woman he'll be losing if he doesn't change his ways. This may be sad, but I say power to you, Janetta. No one should be treated badly and stick around for more abuse. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2009 6:21:00 AM
hmm, emotional, Jane , I think someone has hurt you badly. please get over it, there is a rom for true love if you don't let bitterness to be the guard of your heart. love this, check your soupmail amd reply. keep writing
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