Walk




                                     morning ritual...
                                     the sound of her lead
                                     on stairs
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Very cute!
Desk Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Hi, Kim, thank you for stopping by, have a great day.
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:14 AM
- There are certainly many ways to write a haiku I love the original version - 5-7-5 syllables ( the sound of her lead / on stairs she waits faithfully - / morning ritual - Hope you had a lovely trip :) - hugs
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September 5, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise, Thank you for your comment. Have a great day.
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