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Wales To Me

Wales to me is a floating melody of soothing hums, when sea breeze to tranquil shores comes, sprinkling buried golden hues, over swaying grassland in recluse. Lulling little kids to breathe free - in spiral dreams, come sing of Wales to me. Wales is an exquisite painting of ancient mysteries, of the hill forts from buried cities that once bubbled exuberance in glee now boast of a beauty carefree. When daisies bloom in lilac spring, asleep under soothing blankets sing, oft shimmering crystals on canvas- on starry nights, come paint Wales for me. Wales is an unwritten muse to be poured in ink from the red brick window turning pink, preserved in the breeding-box valley, shimmering dew on golden hay in old alley. Rising aroma of cuisines from wet chimneys, hustling wind rushing through wagon dinghies, chasing me to the castle in hilltop fields - in long lost pastures, write of Wales to me. Wales is a rejuvenating dream that quenches my thirst to explore unseen soaring bubbles burst, taking me through white patches of dusk, in blue skies drenching me with musk. The mornings welcomed by chirping bird, lamb white days riding with their herd, mauve twilight sparkling rising moon, beholding me from afar as I swoon. Beyond continents and vast seas free - loving people, come dream of Wales with me. June 10, 2020 Wales Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward ~Premiere Contest Winner: 3rd Place

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Date: 7/6/2020 3:55:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your great win! A poetic imagination! par excellence!!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 1:34:00 AM
Thank you for your second visit and kind appreciation Krish! Blessings :)
Date: 7/5/2020 3:59:00 PM
A very imaginative and entertaining piece. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Aditi. Keep pouring your boundless ink. This is an instant FAVE!!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 4:01:00 PM
Glad you love it my dear. Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation and for the fave. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 1:40:00 PM
Aditi, it was after reading your tribute to Wales that I was inspired to write my own. Prior to that I didn't think I would have anything to say, but your words and your wonderful imagination nudged me on. Thank you! This truly is a very touching ode to a lovely place. Congrats, and many blessings to you ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 4:01:00 PM
I am really honored that my muse inspired you to create a beautiful lyric for your memories of Wales, which turned out to be touching, soothing and enchanting. I am really happy for your podium win my friend. Thank you for being a source of inspiration to me. Blessed by your kind wishes. Blessings :)
Date: 7/5/2020 4:47:00 AM
A very special poem - soaring, in fact! Well done on it doing so well in my contest, Aditi.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest Julia :)
Date: 6/12/2020 2:35:00 AM
great write that captures Wales beauty well. You mentioned you have not been to Wales, yet you describe it well! Best of luck in the contest.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 7:19:00 AM
I tried to explore with my imaginations and readings. Thank you for your encouraging words Krish! God bless you :)
Date: 6/10/2020 10:51:00 AM
Beautifully composed Aditi, I visit Cardiff regularly as my daughter lives there. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:25:00 PM
Glad you loved my words Tom. I have never been there but do wish to visit someday. Thank you for the wishes. God bless you :)

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