Waking Up To Life

Waking up to life!

I wish, I wake up in your arms 
'everyday', or you in mine;
Even the thought of a prospect,
makes my life seem fine!

A deep breath fill my lungs 
with December morning chill,
More than that, it is your thought 
that it permeates and fill!

Drifting into sheer awareness, 
of your presence, though distant;
Reinvigorates, every atom and 
every molecule, the very instant!

Environment in which we discovered,
our love may seem strange;
But, it is the essence of that love,
so unique there ain't any range!

Days aren't far when the seeming
distance is negated - on its own;
Time, space and identity gone,
our spirit together alone!

Pre-occupied world - materialistic,
always in an ongoing strife;
You and I as one - in contented bliss
have woken up to life!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/24/2017 7:18:00 AM
You write very well ...
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Guptaji.... Hearing this from a seasoned writer like you is so encouraging... Thank you...
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Guptaji.... Hearing this from seasoned writers from you is so encouraging... Thank you...
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