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Waking up from trance

burdened wandering among negative energies although for the most part they impacted him not he searched in vain for that elusive elixir of love resonating at a frequency matching his own poised in stillness, he exited the lucid dream recognised all as one, as thoughts he did stream

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/8/2024 11:22:00 AM

Golly, this is brilliant. I see horrid poems get tons of reads. 4th grade poetry! My daughter brought up a point..do not count comments. Count reads. Example…I wrote a poem about RFK Jr~ long ago.It has wellover 1000 reads,. And eight comments? Poets think we live in the strastophere? Poems about reality, they do not like. Just write whats your reality, I say! My Mom was right..people do not think the same way, I was a kid when she told me. Pangie xx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/8/2024 8:18:00 PM

Yes, exactly. We should be authentic about what we write. Basically we are writing for ourselves, sharing with the few who choose to pair