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I woke this morning to the sound of sleet tapping on my windows but after several minutes there had been a hush. I looked out and saw a soft blanket of snow. Not in itself cause for wonder, but in New Orleans it's very unusual. It was only a couple of inches, but it was the impetus for this write. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * They twirled in the swirling wind No costume worn, ever twinned each a beauty that transcends ~ each crystal from the sky descends I danced among them like a child filled with wonder, I was beguiled until I realized and sorrowfully felt my touch was spurring them to melt From my window I watched, enthralled as feathery fliers they lay sprawled safe from the heated warmth of me a flock of snowflakes, a Winter flurry

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Date: 1/18/2018 2:04:00 AM
- It's beautiful to look at ... but I could have been without the cold snow ... - A beautifully described winter landscape, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
ty so much.
Date: 1/18/2018 1:21:00 AM
Wonderful write, my friend, in appreciation of something we get FAR too much of here ... what's coal to some is diamond to others, it's all in the perspective. Lovely poem, so peaceful and joyous! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
thanks and a ;-)
Date: 1/17/2018 6:07:00 PM
I haven't seen or felt snow in many years, thank you for allowing me to do so
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
thank YOU, Frederic.
Date: 1/17/2018 5:27:00 PM
oh Lin the snow really inspired such a wonderful poem this is truly beautiful and into my faves for when we next get snow and I am moaning at what an inconvenience it is!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:58:00 AM
thanks, Jan
Date: 1/17/2018 4:30:00 PM
a lovely description of your rare snowfall, lin! we had a bit of snow here in new york, too, but it quickly disappeared, leaving just some icy slush...
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:58:00 AM
thanks, Ilene.

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