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Waking the Light

Fair dawn calls touching pale flesh, that reminds me to wake sparks doused by threadbare night’s lament-- till rays sun-dance eyes Any Poem Under 10 Lines Sponsor: SKAT by nette onclaud Poetic Form: shadorma

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 11:00:00 PM

wonderful....win....PD

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2013 4:37:00 AM

Congrats on the win , nette

Skat A

Date: 11/8/2013 9:05:00 PM

nette, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

Date: 10/10/2012 6:58:00 AM

Soupmail.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/22/2012 7:54:00 PM

Amazing!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2012 6:53:00 PM

Very creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading about your sun-dances eyes of morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2012 5:58:00 PM

You truly enlighten my day by your incredible poetry my friend! I am blown away by your delightful poem you have written here! My eyes love to see wondrous sights such as poems like this! You have pleased my need for great poetry Nette! Thank you! Awesome Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 5:31:00 PM

wow, this is amazing, one of the best I've seen, Nette. Glad you liked my moonless night. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2012 12:40:00 PM

beautiful write, Nette - a sure winner

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/22/2012 11:29:00 AM

Nice enjambment!! //I was TRYING to count the syllables!! LOL am I OK? [I would add to your direction verse are in groupings** of 3 lines, 2 lines & 3 lines, that's what I didn't get until you added your whole poem which wasn't there at first ;)]Light & Love

Cory Long

Date: 8/22/2012 11:11:00 AM

lovely poem you have penned.. have a great day thanks for stopping by :) cory

Good Night

Date: 8/22/2012 10:59:00 AM

nice poem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2012 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful small verse, Nette !!!! Hope you`re smiling and are happy. - oxox huggs // Anne-Lise <3