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Waking the Light

Fair dawn calls

touching pale flesh, that

reminds me

to wake sparks

doused by threadbare night’s  lament--

till rays sun-dance eyes




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by nette onclaud
Poetic Form: shadorma

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Poet Destroyer A

November 9, 2013 at 11:00 PM

wonderful....win....PD

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 9, 2013 at 4:37 AM

Congrats on the win , nette

Skat A

November 8, 2013 at 9:05 PM

nette, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

October 10, 2012 at 6:58 AM

Soupmail.

Kash Poet

August 22, 2012 at 7:54 PM

Amazing!!!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2012 at 6:53 PM

Very creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading about your sun-dances eyes of morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

August 22, 2012 at 5:58 PM

You truly enlighten my day by your incredible poetry my friend! I am blown away by your delightful poem you have written here! My eyes love to see wondrous sights such as poems like this! You have pleased my need for great poetry Nette! Thank you! Awesome Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2012 at 5:31 PM

wow, this is amazing, one of the best I've seen, Nette. Glad you liked my moonless night. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

August 22, 2012 at 12:40 PM

beautiful write, Nette - a sure winner

Debbie Guzzi

August 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM

Nice enjambment!! //I was TRYING to count the syllables!! LOL am I OK? [I would add to your direction verse are in groupings** of 3 lines, 2 lines & 3 lines, that's what I didn't get until you added your whole poem which wasn't there at first ;)]Light & Love