Waking

In those special moments where dreams meet reality and new dreams begin

My soul stirs, my mind begins to wake still foggy with the night’s abstract illusions

I hear you breathing that slow, steady sleep breathing

I reach out and touch your hand

I feel you stir

The desire to be close to you overwhelms me

As I slide across the bed toward you…you innately sense my longing for you and 
your body begins to be aroused

The passion within me ignites

I want to be as close as two people can possibly be

I long to give myself to you

Softly I touch you, your body responds

Freely I give myself over to you…opening to you…welcoming you…holding 
nothing back

We are entangled, interwoven, meshed together as we consummate our love

Birds sing, the sun rises on a new day, animals play

The world is a symphony and we are its conductor

Directing the grandest, most sensuous love song ever written

The instruments play to our every move

Choruses raise their voices in one glorious crescendo as we explode in each 
others embrace

Softly we cradle each other, basking in the afterglow of our love

Quietly we whisper

A new dream begins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 5/8/2013 9:24:00 PM
Elizabeth, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 3/14/2011 8:32:00 PM
Most romantic one of the bunch! Congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:41:00 AM
Elizabeth what a beautiful write, congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:11:00 AM
Beautiful, Elizabeth! You have such a romantic soul! Continue to follow your inspiration!
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
Congrats Elizabeth on this very sensual & passionate write-- and you ended this poem so wonderfully, with that new dream--- way to go on your win :) --nikko :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Elizabeth on your wonderful win in Chris's contest .. amazing entry luv.. so enjoy...
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:35:00 PM
wow such passion, with so much feeling, love the last line. congrats for this well deserved HM. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:53:00 PM
Wow! This is so romantic and beautifully written, Elizabeth. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:56:00 PM
this is lovely, many congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Chris, Elizabeth
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Elizabeth. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2008 3:18:00 PM
Elizabeth, Just read your poem and loved it! Very rrrrrrrrromatic and sexy!! Attaa go Girl!! Cherilyn - keep writing - you got the page sizzling....!
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Date: 8/26/2008 6:37:00 AM
*I feel you stir The desire to be close to you overwhelms me* A lovely thing to feel, a wonderful thing to remember ... congratulations on your Honourable Mnetion
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Date: 8/26/2008 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations Elizabeth on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Whew, what a beautiful write. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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