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WAKING

I rise through a softness  
that doesn’t belong to morning~ 
a pale, suspended hush  
and time has loosened its grip  
and everything waits.  

After anesthesia, 
the world returns in fragments:  
a voice shaped like water,  
light bending without edges,  
my own name drifting toward me  
as if unsure where to land.  

I am neither here nor gone,  
just floating in the seam  
between forgetting and recall,  
held by a gentleness  
I didn’t know I needed.  

Then breath finds its rhythm.  
Then the room gathers itself.  
Then the body remembers  
how to be a body again.  

And I open my eyes  
to the simple miracle  
of being welcomed back~  
slowly, quietly,  
as though waking  
were a kind of grace.
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Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 2:27 AM
- A strange but gentle awakening...relaxing feeling - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 12:50 AM
Well described. I love waking up as if the surgery never even happened. It's so cool.
Swan Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 12:22 AM
How gently this describes the switch to consciousness of post op waking.
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:46 PM
So tenderly, patiently and well-described, Sara. Morning to you! ~ gw
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