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Wakes the Moon

~     the sun, due her sleep, kissed goodnight, the shy moon's cheek ... just to make him blush     ~






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Monoku Pick A Picture What Cha See" Poetry Contest, James Edward Lee, Sr., Sponsor. I chose picture number three. *

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Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2018 at 5:03 PM

It was indeed a beauty. BIG congrats.

Gregory Richard Barden

April 22, 2018 at 6:14 AM

Thanks, Buddy - much appreciated, my friend! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues

April 21, 2018 at 9:42 AM

Gorgeous! Congrats, Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden

April 21, 2018 at 9:53 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Kim! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2018 at 6:26 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden

April 21, 2018 at 9:53 AM

Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - thanks so much, Friend! :-) <3

Susan Gentry

April 21, 2018 at 12:26 AM

Shy moon's cheek... great imagery. Well done.

Gregory Richard Barden

April 21, 2018 at 9:52 AM

Thank you so much, Susan! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

April 20, 2018 at 11:29 PM

Sublime imagery, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win.

Gregory Richard Barden

April 21, 2018 at 12:10 AM

That's very kind of you, Line - thank you and blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 5, 2018 at 6:27 PM

This made me smile, that thought of the sun making the moon blush. Just also wanted to pass by to say very, very belated Thank you! For reading through a bunch of my writes and even adding them to your faves. It is an honor for me if somebody is able to relate and be moved by any of my writes. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, very deeply appreciated. God bless you!

Gregory Richard Barden

April 21, 2018 at 12:10 AM

This is such a wonderful, heartfelt comment, Kabuteng, and I so greatly appreciate you taking the time! I don't get a lot of "reading" times these days, but I was drawn to your style and enjoyed your work very much. Blessings to you, my friend! :-)