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Waken

I had been feeling restless for some time, 
But today, I awoke in the afternoon 
Feeling truly at peace for the first time.
 
A sense of calm enveloped me, 
Along with focus and drive, 
As a myriad of emotions surged within, 
Like a soldier readying for battle, he rides.

The burden had lifted, 
In its place, victory stood firmly, 
Next to the kin that surrounded me.
 
I wondered who this entity was, 
That has taken shape, shining. 
His head held high,
In perfected pridefulness. 
If he was tailored for this purpose? 

Though I felt grounded, 
My victorious battle was the pinnacles!
Pearls of wisdom on this journey. 

Direction seemed to emerge, 
Greeting me with a handshake. 
This profound state, 
An altered consciousness, 
I questioned; am I home?

To: Todd Bradley

Copyright © William Darnell Sr | Year Posted 2024

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/8/2024 1:06:00 PM so it WAS an epiphany. I was noticing your note to Tom. This is so interesting to read. Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/9/2024 5:07:00 PM The Spirit within me where He dwells. He was the true center point of my epiphany as I slept and has much more depth than I could write. Brought me clarity. Warm Regards, William

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/8/2024 7:55:00 AM You as well. Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/8/2024 8:47:00 AM Pure Heartedness, thanks, Richard!

Tom Woody Date: 5/8/2024 5:23:00 AM Awesome poetic epiphany William. Let's hope the feeling lasts for more than just a day Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/8/2024 6:58:00 AM Hello, Tom! The epiphany you speak of will last the rest of my time in this world. I am in this world, but I am not of this world. Thank you for supporting me in my endeavors yet to come. Warm Regards, Williams

Duke Beaufort Date: 5/8/2024 5:05:00 AM William, your poem expresses how dealing with feelings can seem like a battle. Not an easy feat at all to feel good. You're bringing a smile to my inner self this morning. TY!! Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/8/2024 7:30:00 AM Duke, I'd like to thank you first of all. You have spoken profound words to me, and I'll pounder every word you've said. Unknowingly, you were the messenger that delivered an answer to a prayer said long ago. Because of this, our friendship will remain forever, in this time and after this life. I try to find the good in everyone, being right or wrong. Sir, I'm at a loss here for words, but I know you are a genuine soul. Everything is beautiful to me, a philocalist,(rare word,) that finds beauty in all things being. I am just a servant living the best I can for a God who blew life into my lungs and brought me to breathe. But you've brought me confidence, uniqueness, and compassion, and to me, that's a trait and a man worth knowing. God's Blessings to you, and may they find you abundantly. Have a Great Day! Warm Regards, William

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/8/2024 4:37:00 AM Hello William, your poem beautifully encapsulates a transformative journey from restlessness to profound peace. I loved the imagery of emotions akin to a soldier's preparation and victory replacing burden. Your introspection on newfound clarity and purpose evokes a sense of wonder and gratitude. It's a testament to the resilience of the human spirit amidst life's uncertainties. Wonderful! - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/8/2024 8:42:00 AM Daniel, hello, I am William, and a pleasure to meet you. Without going into a long reply, your presence in my life is a blessing alone, that I accept. Your tone in your speech is profound within my soul. I'm honored and humbled at this predestined crossroad of meetings. In closing, you've shown me and brought back esteem to me with confidence knowing what direction in clarity for me to finish out my journey here. Thank you for this crossroad and support in my endeavors. God Bless you and I hope your blessing comes abundantly. I Christ Jesus' name I pray. Have a Great Day! Warm Regards, William

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/8/2024 4:11:00 AM What an uplifting piece. May your purpose be fulfilled and your confidence rewarded. Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 5/8/2024 4:41:00 AM Hello again, my friend. Touching and uplifting are you, and a blessing are your words. You are genuine, Richard, I feel you from across the screen. Crazy, eh? Sixth Sense? And thank you, too, by the way, for acknowledgment. Warm Regards, William Have a Great Day!