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MY FIRST ATTEMPT

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Autumn Rose Wood

October 14, 2008 at 2:59 PM

Impressive! Visually and poetically stimulating. Thanks!

Michael Degenhardt

October 14, 2008 at 9:24 AM

Simply lovely, the imagery pops on this write. Love the format as well. Michael

Constance La France

October 13, 2008 at 4:18 PM

Hello...first attempt... pretty darn good... lots of good fultons written for the contest... going to be difficult to judge... thanks for your comment on my poem ... soft like mittens.. much appreciated..constance

James Foulk

October 13, 2008 at 10:18 AM

your first attempt was a great poem, i love these shape poems, so different.

Christopher Higgins

October 13, 2008 at 9:51 AM

Your first attempt is a wonderful beginning. I love your work Deneen. The poem is strong, and it captures the mood very well. Its very vivid...I can see it all.