Wake Up My Heart

Wake the embers that smolder inside
Up above the coldness of my doubt
My burning desire will serve as guide 
Heart aflame with passion ends loves drought
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Peter  Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations, every lines, every words are passion laden
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 10:36 AM
Thank you!
Pett Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win MD, great Quatrain. :))
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Thank you. Appreciate you kind comment.
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:35 PM
Short and sweet, congratulations
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Yes, an economy of words is often what I strive for :-) Thank you for visiting.
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:36 AM
A fine write MD, congrats :)
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Thank you. I’ve enjoy many of yours.
Kimathi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:45 AM
What a rich imagery your poem has! Congrats MD, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Thank you for reading and encouraging comments.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace