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Wake Up My Heart

Wake the embers that smolder inside Up above the coldness of my doubt My burning desire will serve as guide Heart aflame with passion ends loves drought

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Chigbo Solomon Peter

Date: 10/23/2017 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations, every lines, every words are passion laden

Md Johnson
Date: 10/27/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thank you!

Roy Pett

Date: 10/22/2017 4:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win MD, great Quatrain. :))

Md Johnson
Date: 10/22/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thank you. Appreciate you kind comment.

Brian Davey

Date: 10/22/2017 2:35:00 PM

Short and sweet, congratulations

Md Johnson
Date: 10/22/2017 4:25:00 PM

Yes, an economy of words is often what I strive for :-) Thank you for visiting.

Gary Smith

Date: 10/22/2017 10:36:00 AM

A fine write MD, congrats :)

Md Johnson
Date: 10/22/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thank you. I’ve enjoy many of yours.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/22/2017 7:45:00 AM

What a rich imagery your poem has! Congrats MD, for your placement in the contest! ;-)

Md Johnson
Date: 10/22/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thank you for reading and encouraging comments.