Wake Up Little Mermaid

In the water way down deep
A little mermaids fast asleep
Dreaming of how it would be
If one fine day she could see
The wonderful world on the land
And everything that is so grand
Imagining her tail would
Split in two so that she could
Walk around exploring sights
All the beautiful delights
From every corner, street and space
A smile upon her face
Lights and music, kids and fun
Her adventure has begun
But soon she starts to miss here world
And this unhappy mermaid girl
Wakes up and excitement starts
To fill up her gladdened heart
Being back where she belongs
Singing a precious new song
As her sea friends join right in
Joyous laughter will begin
No more dreaming, shes awake
To her home in the blue lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Lovely, Robin. Congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Robin, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Congrats on your win Robin!! A different take but I like it.
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Robin, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations on a nice win. Love, Joyce
Jerden Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:32 AM
There's no place like home... Good one. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 7:31 PM
dropping back with my congratulations Robin Hugs Jan xxxx
Eastman Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 11:39 AM
There were many great poems in the contest. Yours was one of the best. Thank you for entering my contest and letting me help to display your work here on PoetrySoup.
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:45 PM
I've always found forested blue lakes to be so peaceful, and tranquil, just as your mermaid does. What a wonderful place she lives, and what a unique way to see it you have. Well penned, and best of luck with the comp.
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 11:49 PM
this is sweet, Robin, and different to have her on a blue lake!! It sounds so serene.
United Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Beautifully written this will do well in the contest Robin. hugs Jan xxx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace