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Wake Up Call,To Do It All.

I was walking along an express freeway, My mind was far from still; With my head all in a tizzy, And my body feeling chill: When I heard that sound of thunder, And lightening that could kill; The Lord came slowly passing by, And said son you're lookin ill. Yes Lord I know it's true, Long ago I should have been a part of you; But yet I know it's not too late: To have me do.... Whatever you wnt me to. --- Princefreakasso (Artist and Poet)

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/29/2009 8:45:00 PM

Nice write. And yes, it is never too late. An inspiring poem. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comment on my poem. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 10/7/2009 1:36:00 PM

the last poem I wrote is meant to be a companion piece to Van Gogh's Starry Night.The way I read this it sounds like you could paint(i'm assuming you meant you're a painter) a picture of the main character walking along the freeway and you'd see the clouds turn dark and an emerging face would look down on our main character,or something like that.Then you could have the poem side by side with the picture and voila, the artist and the poet come together in one visual masterpiece:) just a thought.

P Sheart

Date: 10/7/2009 9:42:00 AM

Hi Prince Love the spiritual intuition in the outstanding Pastoral. Beautifully written, smile. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty

Donielle Smith

Date: 10/7/2009 9:01:00 AM

Hi, I'm Donielle, and I enjoyed reading your poem. It was very spritually uplifting. continuted success!! Donielle S........

Amber Jenkins

Date: 10/7/2009 8:35:00 AM

bEAUTIFUL!