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Wake Up a Volcanic Explosion

On my darkest Day you make me shine Forever you will always be mine The Twinkle in your eyes light up my soul Your Spirit moves through my body and makes it whole The virtue you have could change the world I was a sleeping Volcano and you awaken me The crust was hard and filled with lava A hot molten rock by just the sight of you Awoke this Volcano and Lava started to flow Deep into the ocean seas beyond our control The lava flowed across land with it’s crust hardening Then penetrating the land Once the eruption had ceased this volcano Was fast asleep bringing peace back to the land Once causing this land to tremble and become weak Now brings peace and harmony to the one I speak Sponsored by: Eve Roper Contest name: Sleeping Volcano Date: 12/30/2018

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Victoria Addino

Date: 1/25/2019 3:18:00 PM

Such a strong meaningful poetic display of words, your talent is greatly appreciated... Thank You

Frances Schiavina

Date: 1/15/2019 11:32:00 AM

That's magnificent! A sparkle of love lighting up the world in peace to the opposite of a super volcano erupting and covering the earth in the icy darkness of a heart without love.

Bobby May
Date: 1/15/2019 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Frances very much!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2018 1:47:00 PM

Well written Bobby, good luck. Best wishes for the new year. Tom.

Bobby May
Date: 12/30/2018 8:42:00 PM

Thank Tom very much, Happy New Year My friend stay safe

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 12/30/2018 8:41:00 AM

Beautifully written, Bobby. Best of luck! :)

Bobby May
Date: 12/30/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Kaveesha for that beautiful comment, happy new year and stay safe my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/30/2018 8:23:00 AM

WoW! Bobby, I love how you used the things in nature to write a beautiful love story. The love within this piece overflows in such a way that it captures your readers eye. You are so a talented writer my friend, contest or not you have penned winning lines! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Bobby May
Date: 12/30/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thank you for such awesome comments my friend but, the credit should go to the one who inspired me to write this she is amazing. Happy New Year and stay safe my friend!!